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I am applying for a loan processor and a friend recomm. this job to me.

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Dear Loan Processing Manager:

John Smith recommended I contact you regarding the open Loan Processor II position with Financial Comp. I believe my experience as a debt collector presently, will make me a candidate for the position.
As you will see from the enclosed resume, I have over a year of experience in the financial industry and five years of customer service experience in retail and communications. My resume shows I have been in positions with great deals of responsibilities based on my work ethic and assertiveness. My desire to excel personally and professionally helped me reach my goals in the past leaving me confident with the future of my career.
If you have questions or would like to schedule an interview, please contact me at 1234567890. I look forward to meeting you to further discuss employment opportunities with Financial.

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